Dear Sir,

I have read your Doña Mango y la mujer alta stories, and here is my report:

1. In 'Best regards from the Britney Factory,' you present us with a bunch of zulipantras. Nice word, but what are they? What do they look like? We're given clues, but we don't find this out until the second page. What are zulipantras?

2. Your stories are intriguing, the pacing quick, and you make good use of stock episodes. But you should consider how to better present and describe your characters.

Sincerely,

--Christine Rockwood